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Сегодня был урок и на уроке исправляли ошибки в сочинении в ДЗ. У студента в браузере установлен софт, который автоматически подсвечивает ошибки. Такое же может быть и в смартфоне. Но главное (!) чтобы при этом оно не предлагало варианты ответа. Иначе, смысла в выполнении ДЗ нет, как и нет смысла в преподавателе, что влечёт за собой такие же мысли у ученика и его вероятный уход от реального учителя к всевозможным ИИ.
SkillzRun
вот например домашка которую надо проверить :
One theory says:
People with high level of testosterone and dopamine tend to enjoy competing more.
Testosterone presents in men and women. Winning causes a rise in testosterone levels, gives a person a sense of power and success. The desire for this feeling might encourage us to be more competitive. In contrast when we lose, testosterone levels drop, which helps explain the agony of defeat
Alternative theory is that of ‘plasticity’. The brain is constantly ’rewiring’ or changing is structure.
The nerve cells in the brain are called neurones and have extensions called dendrites and axons. If we use our brain for activities such as problem-solving of information recall, it will generate more neurones and axons related to those activities. It improves brain function and cause us to perform better
И вот пример проверки этой домашки ИИ :
Alright, let's break it down. I spotted a few grammatical errors and areas for improvement in your text. Here's the rundown:
- "People with high level of testosterone and dopamine tend to enjoy competing more." - It should be "a high level" since "level" is a countable noun here.
- "Testosterone presents in men and women." - The verb "presents" is not quite right here; it should be "is present in" for clarity.
- The structure of the sentence starting with "Winning causes a rise in testosterone levels..." is a bit cumbersome. Consider breaking it into simpler sentences for clarity.
- "In contrast when we lose," - There should be a comma after "contrast" to properly separate the introductory phrase.
- "Alternative theory is that of ‘plasticity’." - It would be clearer as "The alternative theory is that of ‘plasticity’."
- "The brain is constantly ’rewiring’ or changing is structure." - "is" should be "its" to indicate possession.
- "neurones" - While "neurones" is an acceptable spelling in British English, it's more commonly spelled "neurons" in American English. Consistency in spelling according to the chosen dialect is important.
- "problem-solving of information recall," - This phrase is a bit awkward. It could be improved to "problem-solving and information recall."
- The overall text could benefit from more connective tissue, such as transitions between ideas, to make the narrative flow more smoothly.
Considering these points, I'd give your text around a 75 out of 100. It's pretty solid in conveying the ideas but needs a bit of polishing on the grammatical front and in terms of clarity and coherence.
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